RaunchyFlask's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inner Darkness]

Awesome!

Great proportions, shading, detail, and shadows. Near perfection. This may be the style of sword, but the fore grip bends slightly...

[Luis Day!!!]

Good

Um why does she have 3 boobs?

LegolaSS responds:

a bit harsh i felt...

[Mech Chick]

Love it!

The only thing I like of anime girls with guns is elfves (but not elves with guns >:P) ANyways, I was going to critique on why you didn't edit out the lines, but I see you did that inentionally, I honetsly love the effect! Along with the slightly wrinkled effect. Its not easy to get blue to show up like that, is it shopped? The only thing that confuses my is why there is pencil shavings next to a fountain pen...

LegolaSS responds:

well you see... the background was given to me to work on for the collab... i then did a "pencil" sketch of it... then coloured it in with watered down ink... of course i managed to make a mess and get a coffee stain on it while i was working on my other picture :P... it was all done in flash mx... beacuse im poor an cant get a proper art program :(

[Aionne Ferchozaki Gift]

I tohught it was obvious, but

I guess no one heard...THE CAKE IS A LIE! Its actually a smoking hot girl who gives guys nose bleeds. nice job!

[Evony parody]

Porn under the guise of a video game!

Love it! very close portayal unfortunatly. would like a little more shading, texture, and attention to the face.

My recomendation? do a sketch on real paper, you will have much more control, then scan it in to the computer, and fine touch it. or you could buy a pallete

ZeWitchKid responds:

my paper work is 10 time better than the 100% digital stuff i do, but my scanner is a piece of %%?& and i cant get decent clean lines, beside digital tablets arent the same feeling than pen and paper, on that i agree, and my tablet dosent support tilt and inclinaison, like newer models do, so if i get the old reflex of turning the tablet like a piece of paper,i screw all my lines up, oO

mabie i should get some of theses new models

[moonritual]

Love it!

I have an elf fetish (or at least long ear) So I auto matically like this. I love the time spent shading, however shade is nothing without texture. The ground looks like a peice of obsidian, and her hair looks like clay. Th moon would look good, if it didn't stand out so much from the rest. The glowing orb looks simple. Th transmutaion circle is fine, but my only critique is that it's very uniform, and not very rune or archaic

ZeWitchKid responds:

yyyyep, thats the problems i dont know how to make textures yet in pshop, most tutorials ive been looking at are either vague or cryptic , i cant find what im looking for. so for now all i can do is paint with uniform color and then shade -em with darkened layers and masks, seriously if you got a pointer on a good tuto for texturing be sure to send a pm to me with a link, that would help greatly!

[Happy Halloween from Ciyiana]

Great!

Nice amount of detail and humor, but one question. why doesn't she have nipples?

Jcdr responds:

i'm still too new while drawing them and end screwing it up
no nipples for now :/

[Girls of War]

Awesome!

Great take on the concept, really brought out the feeling of GoW