RaunchyFlask's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Queen]

Artistic!

Im not sure whether it's a man or woman (the face) but it is clear you put much effort, and skill is shown in the proportions, shading and coloring. Great work!

thomahawk responds:

Hah! I know wat you mean ;). I'm currently working on my faces. I find it really hard to draw a nice, attractive, female face. So I'll just keep on doing studies. And thanks for your comment!

[Alice of Wonderland]

Your reply to ArtistGamerGal made no sense at all,

The fact that you did this with a mouse in unprecedented. That is just pure amazing. I find paint a respectable program with a tablet, but a mouse? I can hardly draw a straight line. Anyways, I don't really see how this is mature, but he, creators choice. The face is a little out of preportion and the tendons on her front are a little too extensive. But really really good work

Rooshie responds:

Ms Paint is too pixelated for every part of her body to turn out straight. And no my answer to gamergal was right. She's holdin a gun, she's gonna be light on her feet, she's gonna have her knees bent about to stride stance, that's just how its supposed to be. And its Mature because of suggestive themes, mild language (Period; i get into shit for stating to girls that piss me off that theyre on their period, them saying that its offensive) and tits. yes tits.

[Level 42]

Good

I actually completely disagree. The angle of the head isn't bad. the angle of the head is off, so that the mouth is a little to the left, and the eyes need to be rotated a little. However, I think tat the body is off. The left breast is too high. The leggings are highly detailed.The armor is detailed like plate metal armor, yet the cringe at waist seems like a cloth. The tails is utterly dispicable. it is a black mar on a peice of art. The style of cat woman is random, but not unwanted. The hair is not great, but there is nothng excedingly wrong. The right shoulder is odd, mainly because of the misplacment or the skin-armor boundary. The overall apperance is very sexy, and the background is a nice touch. However, the overall lack of detail, and the flamboyant displacemtn of breasts majorly detracts from the overall image.

LegolaSS responds:

thanks for the indepth review... i can see where your comming from in most of your points... some i disagree in but overall a very usefull review... i will look into these problems in future pictures so my artwork can be improved... thanks :3

[Softy]

Good

For only using colors this is fairly good. however on a stylistic view, her apperal makes no sense. The top looks like a bathing suit, but then it spreads into a miniskirt, with a seemingly seperate rest of the bottom. Also, the breasts are to far apart, and the left hand is to big. Good execution, a few design mistakes.

Artyluck responds:

Damn, lol, it is bathing suit. :D Don't touch my clothes design damn it! LOL! Breast can be different (wtf with you, ideal ppl? :D) Breasts are not too far, it's just her own special body, lol. You can call her a freak. :D

Just trying to say, why everyone trying to see idealistic person in every draw he see? Eh'... I don't feel any critics here, can't see you're drawing too or something. Well, anyway, thanks for right review, I almost agree with it. :D

[Luis Day!!!]

Good

Um why does she have 3 boobs?

LegolaSS responds:

a bit harsh i felt...