You made me
Well for starters, the tuft of hair on top of her head it distracting, and out of place, and I assume that it sole purpose it so cover up the extremely blocky thing on her head you call bangs. the bottom bangs are fine though. The hair visible from behind her leg is a devoid of detail, it looks like sculpty, not real hair. Her left hand is oddly swollen, like a kanckle of the wrist, and the right breast seems to have the same problem. The odd speaker things coming out of her shoulders don't match the rest out the armor, and the shard of stone above her leg doesn't seem to be attached to the shin gaurd. The knee plate's rivits seem to be two dimensional, like they were painted on, and the rivets above that aren't attached to anything, also floating. besides that, her vagina is unnaturally low. The dress is so short that you could see her lingerie even without the extreme angle. And the background seems off kilter to the rest of the drawing. All in all, a piece of shit. You might as well try to get a homeless gay guy to whack off to this then any self respecting person.
*please note that this review is overly harsh, because you challenged me, and there is very little wrong with it at all. Infact I find it near perfection for its style. I can only wish to draw this well someday. Keep up the good work.