Great!
This is a really good drawing, but to me it feels like somthing I would see in a story book, and not hangin on a wall. None the less great work. The water is a little flat, especially for a waterfall. I would like to see something more hubilant, and reflextive. Also, the bridge is a little wonky.
Awesome!
Great proportions, shading, detail, and shadows. Near perfection. This may be the style of sword, but the fore grip bends slightly...
Good
Its ok... The background needs a lot of work. Its the bastard child of poor shading and not clean monocolor backgrounds. The foot and leg angles and proportions need work, and the panties look like a dress up game, as well as being large and hunky. the straps look like you tried to make it look interesting, but let me tell you it failed. The hair is messy, and both faces are poor. The bikini also looks like a dress up game, as well as being to small, or oddly shaped. the boobs should not have two shine spots for one source of light. The nipples are to small, and in the wrong place. The back arch is two sharp, should be a curve. Them arm is fine, but the elbow tip is a bit far up. Collar bone placement and left arm is great. Over all effect would be good if the splotches I have previously mention didn't wrack the entire picture.
Thanks to all who read the entire thing. Amy, I hope this helped.
Lol wow thats a lot of stuff to say. Lol. I will agree though I could fix up a lot of stuff with this picture. Thank you for your comments though.
Good
Unless you are intentionally avoiding an Adult rating, either draw the boobs are cover them up in an artist way. dont just leave them out. face it. This is pretty much porn, so don't leave out important details. (goes for pubes as well
Love it!
The only thing I like of anime girls with guns is elfves (but not elves with guns >:P) ANyways, I was going to critique on why you didn't edit out the lines, but I see you did that inentionally, I honetsly love the effect! Along with the slightly wrinkled effect. Its not easy to get blue to show up like that, is it shopped? The only thing that confuses my is why there is pencil shavings next to a fountain pen...
well you see... the background was given to me to work on for the collab... i then did a "pencil" sketch of it... then coloured it in with watered down ink... of course i managed to make a mess and get a coffee stain on it while i was working on my other picture :P... it was all done in flash mx... beacuse im poor an cant get a proper art program :(
I tohught it was obvious, but
I guess no one heard...THE CAKE IS A LIE! Its actually a smoking hot girl who gives guys nose bleeds. nice job!
Porn under the guise of a video game!
Love it! very close portayal unfortunatly. would like a little more shading, texture, and attention to the face.
My recomendation? do a sketch on real paper, you will have much more control, then scan it in to the computer, and fine touch it. or you could buy a pallete
my paper work is 10 time better than the 100% digital stuff i do, but my scanner is a piece of %%?& and i cant get decent clean lines, beside digital tablets arent the same feeling than pen and paper, on that i agree, and my tablet dosent support tilt and inclinaison, like newer models do, so if i get the old reflex of turning the tablet like a piece of paper,i screw all my lines up, oO
mabie i should get some of theses new models
Love it!
I have an elf fetish (or at least long ear) So I auto matically like this. I love the time spent shading, however shade is nothing without texture. The ground looks like a peice of obsidian, and her hair looks like clay. Th moon would look good, if it didn't stand out so much from the rest. The glowing orb looks simple. Th transmutaion circle is fine, but my only critique is that it's very uniform, and not very rune or archaic
yyyyep, thats the problems i dont know how to make textures yet in pshop, most tutorials ive been looking at are either vague or cryptic , i cant find what im looking for. so for now all i can do is paint with uniform color and then shade -em with darkened layers and masks, seriously if you got a pointer on a good tuto for texturing be sure to send a pm to me with a link, that would help greatly!
Great!
Nice amount of detail and humor, but one question. why doesn't she have nipples?
i'm still too new while drawing them and end screwing it up
no nipples for now :/
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